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A golden trinket is what I seek
A tempting target for the freak
It's obtaining will be the end of me

I click and tremble and all I find
Is a crack in the space in the line
It's opening will be the end of me

A plant it is and yet its seed
will plague the life in which it breeds
It's growth will be the end of me

This sickness tears the insides apart
tearing through fire and walls
to force the breaking of the laws
This glow it brings to the inside of life
brings with it the corruption alive
to allow me to fail myself

Even if the victim of this begotten danger
had been but another poor stranger
It's life would still have been the end of me

Had the target of its glorious opening not been forgiving
I still would feel the pains of its cancerous spreading
It's birthing would have been the fall of me

This sickness tears the insides apart
tearing through fire and walls
to force the breaking of the laws
This glow it brings to the inside of life
brings with it the corruption alive
to allow me to fail myself

This black death has just now finally been sedated
How can I tell the dying was what I created
Demons come not from the outside as expected
But from inside they are brought in, guests elected
To expand must the enemy in fertile soil sow
In our own green gardens do the dark seeds grow
©2008-2009 ~Shadowwalker1013
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Author's Comments

Inspired by a fucked up day... and it's many unforeseen consequences.

Even though I've been forgiven, my mistake continues to haunt me.

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:iconmerenwen-luinwee:
very inspirering poem, can I illustrate it?

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comics! ~merenwen-comix
member off: *Dark-Emotions ~The-Chibi-Army
:iconshadowwalker1013:
Of course you can :)

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Oppression, quiet and Repressed
Swept under the seams
the bed of the acquiesced
where we sleep, insomniac dreams
:iconcapricornleaf:
A tempting target for the freak...

It's been awhile.. mind if I inquire o'er your mistake?

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I'll die with my eyes open.
:iconshadowwalker1013:
Yeah it has been awhile heh. I actually can't remember the specifics of what I did that caused me to write this, it's been awhile. I do remember it having to do with having a burning urge to buy something expensive, which I knew I did not need, and would probably dispense of soon. I remember being very angry at myself. I think I ended up buying it.

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Oppression, quiet and Repressed
Swept under the seams
the bed of the acquiesced
where we sleep, insomniac dreams
:iconketski:
Interesting. I don't have the money to buy anything to begin with.

As for your poem, excellent once again. :)

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Noooo~ [SPAZ]

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